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Where the Wind Blows

Flightless birds scatter across the sand. The peppered sky makes itself known. Innuendos of things unplanned as the winds cause the dunes to groan. The many-splendored waves are crashing to the rise and fall of turquoise tide. Sea foam gives the shore a good lashing as sand crabs run to the grasses to hide. The wind carries on in a mindless fashion carrying remnants of shells and debris. While stormclouds shriek on by with a passion. There's no calm now on the restless sea. Then quick as it all began it recedes. The wind dies down and blows away. Back to the waters the tide now leads; the end again of a stormy day. for Gail's contest "Where The Wind Blows" written May 17th,2013

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Date: 6/8/2013 10:08:00 AM
A very descriptive poem...nice...congratulations
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:52:00 AM
Deb, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda
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Date: 5/27/2013 5:53:00 PM
Bravo completely wonderful the detail is totally cool. awsome job.
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Date: 5/18/2013 7:29:00 AM
This felt alive...wonderful.
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Date: 5/17/2013 5:42:00 PM
I loved your storm enhanced write here my friend! You have enlightened me by the splendor of this incredible poem Deb! I simply love a good storm, as long as its not damaging, and this piece was all about this alluring storm! What an inspiring poem, Great work!!
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