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'Where The Heart Is Unbroken'

A cold darkness falls deep upon my soul like a faded black cloak, it takes shape I struggle, lost in my quiet anguish I am entrapped within a dark dream-scape in this void, I weep bittersweet tears I waver, between reality and heaven My heart is still, frozen, it lays wide open in quiet darkness, I seek my meaning my existence, but a book on a shelf O, take me to where the heart is unbroken and love is heard in unspoken words I am lost, in the wilderness of life Verse December 12, 2012

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 6:30:00 PM
    I love this Constance. Deep and beautiful. We are not having snow here right now, but I bet it's snowing all the time where you are. I think you must like it in some ways! It has inspired some gorgeous winter poems in you.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 5:24:00 PM
    Wow, what a great write Constance, excellent work. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:57:00 PM
    love this, my friend. Hope you are feeling well and getting in the mood for Xmas

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Constance; You have written a beautiful poem here. A broken heart is hard to mend, but it can happen. It just takes time. Smile, JESUS koves you. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:49:00 PM
    This is one of my favorites of yours Constance, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! Quite the powerful message portrayed within your ingenious verse! I can feel the loneliness being torn within this piece! You have masterfully crafted a beautifully dark poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:43:00 PM
    love is a nag, it nags. and we listen to it. how can we be positive with love as the negative defining our human thoughts. what should we do? find something else to love.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:38:00 PM
    Wow this is sad and emotional, still it is not devoid of hope. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. I hope this note finds you well. Hugs Rick