Where Spring Winds Had Blown

Romantic symbols of a tender day,
hearts with initials were carved on a tree.
In the spring of my life on this perfect April day,
we lay down to dream of what would be.
Beneath a young oak I sat on his knee.

The aroma of freshly mown grass filled the park.
Bearded irises curtsied as a gentle breeze blew
and I ran my hand over the tree’s bark.
Pete was just enjoying the view
when I suggested we etch our love so true.

With a pocketknife the heart was carved
to bear the initials P.T. and C.S.
Fifteen and love starved,
but what our future held, we could not guess.
Still, the initials an innocent bond did profess.

I returned to the park last year
and found my way to the oak that had grown.
Looking up, I saw the initials were still clear.
Though Pete was married and had children of his own,
resurrected feelings surfaced where spring winds had blown.
  


Written February 6, 2012 for Francine’s “English Quintain a Spring Day” Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/27/2012 5:39:00 PM
A sweet, nostalgic write, Carolyn. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Date: 2/27/2012 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/26/2012 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/26/2012 5:05:00 PM
Really cute poem and sentiments Carolyn. Sweet memories. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 2/26/2012 3:28:00 PM
ahhh, that's really nice, Carolyn. Nothing like spring love, and it happened in the spring of your life. Wonderful poem. Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/26/2012 1:40:00 PM
congrats XCarolyn on a well deserved win for this beautiful write on Spring .. very breathtaking words..luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/26/2012 3:57:00 AM
Beautiful Carolyn Congrats xx
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2012 11:02:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on another great win
Login to Reply
Date: 2/8/2012 9:48:00 AM
Very tender, Carolyn. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 4:04:00 PM
Aww that is a sweet poem Carolyn! I really enjoyed this wonderful write this evening! I love the feel of the poem, it makes me feel as if I'm there watching the event with the Irises and especially the large oak tree! Very awesome write my friend!! Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 4:00:00 PM
Smile ˜ I Am Listening To INXS's Song, "Beautiful Girl" * My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Carolyn ˜ Now That I Have Resolved Some Of The Issues In My Youth ¥ Smile ¥ She's Sooo Scared, Sooo Very Frightened, If Anything Should Happen, I'm Right Here, Beautiful Girl * I Love Your Poem Beautiful Carolyn ¥ Just As I Shall Always Love You ¥ My Luv, Forever ¥ John ‡
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2012 3:25:00 PM
Reads like winning material..Good luck in Francine's contest..Those memories sometimes are good aren't they..Sara
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter