Where Love Dances

Let’s meet in the stars
just north of the moon...
Your heart and mine
shimmering, entwined.
Souls melding in time
where dreamers, inclined,
find bliss on higher planes

Let us trip the twilight fancy
two-step with glittering ease
heart to heart, soul to soul
till the sun beckons tomorrow
and our spirits descend
crossing hearts to meet again
in the stars… just north of the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/26/2013 5:01:00 PM
Debra, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2013 11:12:00 AM
Lovely and splendid piece,Debra...Congrats on your well deserved win.....XOXO...
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Date: 1/24/2013 2:40:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2013 12:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win Debra. A very nice write, warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/24/2013 11:48:00 AM
Hey, why didn't you tell me before? We could have combined our trip to the stars. I was going there anyway and you could have hitched a ride on the shooting star on our way back home for nothing!!! Maybe next time.
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Date: 1/24/2013 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 1/24/2013 9:48:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2013 7:13:00 PM
congrats on your win Debra
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Date: 9/7/2012 11:13:00 AM
lovely poem :)
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:47:00 PM
Debra-may I return for another dance amidst the stars? I had to reread this one again bc it awakened something in me when I read it yesterday...You wrote this so brilliantly! Trip the twilight fancy and two-stepping with glittering ease...so sweet these dance moves! :) gwendolen
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Date: 9/4/2012 4:04:00 PM
Deb, I would love to meet someone in the stars just north of the moon! What a galactic kind of date! This is classy poetry and I am lovin every word...u took me to the moon and back in 14 little lines! gwendolen
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Date: 9/4/2012 11:22:00 AM
Just one to share reflective gaze. That's all we need to make our days. To tango with our moon struck souls. Dancing beyond Cupids black holes. EH? :)
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Date: 9/4/2012 9:17:00 AM
Very romantic work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Is this creative piece for a contest, if so winner for sure..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2012 3:26:00 AM
love this Debra, heart to heart, soul to soul, just like reading your poem .
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Date: 9/1/2012 6:26:00 PM
soooo romantic,enjoyed
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:29:00 PM
wow, what a romantic little dance step this is!! I love how you cast the moon and stars in this one, Debra.Very lyrical and romantic.
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Date: 8/31/2012 10:33:00 PM
Lovely as ever.
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Date: 8/31/2012 1:03:00 PM
"just north of the moon' love this phrase! Absolutely love your sweet tender poem, Debra Love and hugs, Jack
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Date: 8/31/2012 6:34:00 AM
Soft and romantic thoughts you have penned, Debra! You have danced to the moon and into my heart with this beauty. I must make a point to dance with my husband this weekend and sprinkle a little stardust! Have a blessed weekend. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 8/31/2012 5:16:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, check out the blue moon tonight :) Cindy
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Debra Squyres
Date: 8/31/2012 9:53:00 AM
Plan too, Cindy...should the clouds cooperate !! lol
Date: 8/31/2012 2:29:00 AM
So wonderfully written Debra. Love floods of all banks in this poem. Provides the reader with a warm, fuzzy feeling. At least for me! Thank you. Have a beautiful day Debra. oxox love / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2012 9:53:00 AM
All my romances seem to be in dreams lol....Glad you enjoyed !!
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