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Where Do We Go To

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Where Do We Go To

When we are asleep
do we float or stay in bed?
Shall we meet in dreams?

I wake up travelled
My mind shuts down to my room
I go away to...

                         Somewhere I used to know

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  1. Date: 3/11/2013 8:32:00 PM
    Like the concept!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:50:00 PM
    This is a cool piece of nostalgia. I thought the way you spaced the last line really emphasized the separation between past and present. Though I don't think this is technically a haiku, maybe a mondo? A mondo is a poem of two three line stanzas. The first asks a question and then second answers it in a unique way... this seems to me to be what you're doing here. Creative and cool... enjoyed!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 1:36:00 AM
    Samantha an excellent image...David

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Great write!..enjoyed