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where did our love go


I hear the thunder rolling thru the skies
I see the lightning bolts pass my eyes
I see the sky completely gray
As I wonder if I should go or stay.

We haven’t been getting along that well
And we seem to put each other through some hell.
Why is it that love can be like the sky?
Sometimes crystal clear and sunny and bright
And sometimes dark and gray like the night.

I recall when our love was fresh and new
And as soft as the morning dew
When our love was like the clear blue sky
So deeply in love was you and I.

Now it seems like all that has changed
And our feelings are not the same.
Where did our love go- I’d like to know
Now it’s dragging as if in tow.

Let’s try to re-ignite that fire
And make our love grow even higher
Let’s sit and recall every moment that we have known
Of when our love had truly shown.
Of every pleasure and every desire
That made the flames create this fire.

Memories can make a person continue to exist
Recalling moments of eternal bliss
So with those memories that burn in my heart
I am going to give our love a brand new start.

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  1. Date: 8/17/2012 4:31:00 PM
    WOW Louis! What a masterpiece of a poem you have written here. I wish you the best. It has been said that - Love is born of nothing, but it dies of everything. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:25:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Louis. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol always

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Good Verse