Where Crimson Bleeds Its Rose

Beneath a half moonlight

you become my dream

a secret uncloaked

emotion unveiled

existence of warmth

between subconscious

and implicit knowledge

And it is there

'neath the soft spot of my heart

where crimson bleeds its velvets

upon your bare breath

Its there where blushful lips

loose their virginity

Where my fair cheeks suffuse

with rosy  glow

Where fiery needs are fulfilled

fervent desires scorched

candlelit pleasures  beheld

Its there were evanescent  visions

take over control

take over this barren soul

As my ardent voice whispers

beneath the tender of your ear

~~~ Mi amor~~

That is the preserved moment

our unwholiness is whole

The moment, your eyes 

capture my own

Only till......

Mr sandman leaves

early mist envelops the bridge

aurora rises in new awakening

and you fade away like zephyr breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/23/2013 3:21:00 PM
Dreamy and sensual Charmaine, love it :) James....
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Date: 10/22/2013 8:43:00 AM
thanks for your sweet comment about me, Charma. This poem represents YOU and how you paint magic with your beautiful words.
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Date: 10/17/2013 3:49:00 PM
A truly beautiful romantic poem, with some of the best imagery I've read in a while (where crimson bleeds its velvets upon his bare breath). Amazing... Jack
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Date: 10/15/2013 2:17:00 PM
passing through for a second haelping, charms.. missed you on drake's last show... :) huggs
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Date: 10/15/2013 5:13:00 AM
Nice moonlight play portrayed.... Thnx Charmaine for visiting my work Crossings.... yeah, after long time posting at poetrysoup..... I do write but not posting here nowadays.... best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/14/2013 10:09:00 AM
Charmaine; You are a blazing torch of golden light . Romance and passion come to life with a vengeance in this work. I am just so happy I found it. Thank you from the bottom of my Gothic heart.
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Date: 10/14/2013 7:31:00 AM
here in the UK, we have a saying for the extraordinary " I'm Gob Smacked" and believe me that is an understatement .. amazing poetry i have just had the honour of reading...
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Date: 10/14/2013 4:00:00 AM
Hold on!!!!! you are killing me, I got to rewind this poem and read it again, Is this free, I feel like I should send you a couple dollars because I should have to pay for poetry like this. Wow Wow Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent poetry poet. Wow!
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Date: 10/14/2013 12:33:00 AM
Thanks for your visit I really appreciated your comment.
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Date: 10/13/2013 5:47:00 PM
I'm never disappointed when I read your poetry; this has such an ethereal, otherworldly quality to it, yet at the same time it is suffused with an earthy passion - wonderful! and thanks for stopping by to read my work :)
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Date: 10/13/2013 4:26:00 PM
Charma, this is excellent, the images you create are just wonderful and it is very well thought out, good job...David
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Date: 10/13/2013 12:16:00 PM
WoW...AMAZING!Love this Charmine.
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Date: 10/12/2013 8:52:00 PM
Lovely lovely.....
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Date: 10/12/2013 5:04:00 PM
Oooooolala really steamy little one!! I liked it, I want to hear more of this persons adventure. Light & Love
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Date: 10/12/2013 3:17:00 PM
You are the mistress of the sensual.....where every line is Charma....always refined but beautifully filled with the fire of passion! Another that sends prickles one's senses!
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Date: 10/12/2013 4:36:00 AM
Oh my Charma...The queen of romance strikes again and what a title! I LOVE this, especially the sad, longing conclusion...Have a wonderful, blessed day my beautiful and talented friend - Tim
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Date: 10/11/2013 10:40:00 PM
This is extremely beautiful and mesmerizing write my dear friend Charmaine. Sooo love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing you precious gems & superb talent to me.I'll come back to read more. More power & blessings to you. Thank you so much as well for your precious time to comment on my blogs, my poems etc. So much appreciated. love lots & big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/11/2013 6:29:00 PM
this is sensual and beautiful ...very nicely penned :)
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Date: 10/11/2013 3:22:00 PM
- Oh..... this taking my breath.... so beautiful written !!!! - love it !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/11/2013 1:45:00 PM
waves of emotion caressing my soul, charms... enjoyed the reading of an exquisite romantic scroll... hope you can make it this sunday on drake's show... :) huggs
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Date: 10/11/2013 10:57:00 AM
Eileen took the words right out of my mouth... "Beautiful and enchanting...sensual and satisfying" Love ya... hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 10/11/2013 10:39:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, lovely poesia romantica! Ken
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Date: 10/11/2013 10:34:00 AM
Holy mother of all that is good, Batman! Such captivating sensuality. "Where blushful lips lose their virginity", DAMN!!!!! Kudos on the "Mi Amor" touch of Spanish. =) Powerfully elegant!
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Date: 10/11/2013 8:29:00 AM
One of my favorites of your writings...well done. It is there, woven within the soft veil of night...TAH
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Date: 10/11/2013 7:33:00 AM
You held me captive with this one Charma, got to admit I didn't expect the ending.. As always I enjoyed this beauty from you :) I am doing good thanks how are you? You must enjoy the weekend ahead. Ps: Was nice to here you on Drake's show..
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