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Where Botterflies Go

where butterflies go when summer is no more spider webs when the clouds roll out and the rain begins to pour highway lights where tears dry pavement holds the heat sidewalk beside graffiti walls echos from the street

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/30/2009 12:09:00 PM
Kris...correct the title Where Butterflies Go...you know...when I saw it I read bottleflies..which to me go around the garbage and the dead...not at all what you were going for in this THOUGHT provoking verse. Also, grouped by 4 lines you have a nice quatrain with 2nd and 4th line rhyme and 6th and 8th. Light & Love
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Date: 7/12/2009 10:32:00 AM
Wow I really like this, it flows so well......Aleera
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