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when you leave

when you leave me dont look back
cause iif you do you,ll see me cry
it,s so hard to say goodbye
and watch our love just die

will you remember years from now
or will you just forget
the time i had with you
i will never ever forget

but when you hold another
in your  arms so tight
every once in a while 
please remember you held me close at night

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  1. Date: 9/17/2010 5:39:00 AM
    sweet love poem...enjoyed!