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When You Are There

When you are there, In the mist That salty barrier that swallows our kisses I can only see half of your dreams Those smiles are certainly, memories I know I should be making As quick as I can Before you go. But like a spider, I weave only so fast… Only so fast before I know, That I have gathered all that I need, All I need before you go Back into the distant grey tides When I am here, With nothing but sand to hold my weight of worries. Fistfuls of worry and love. You ought to know… I love you, even when you go… Even more so when you go…

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Date: 4/4/2011 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Julia for the contest "The one that got away" sponsored by Thvia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Thvia, Julia
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Date: 4/2/2011 3:05:00 AM
Profound. Very thought-evoking. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Julia. Lainie
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:38:00 AM
Julia, this is so beautiful, yet such sadness. congrats on being in the winners circle. Harry
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:02:00 PM
Congrats Julia on your awesome win in Thvia's contest with this fantastic write and cool entry luv.. enjoy your sweet success with luv..
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