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When the Piper Was Not Paid

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When the Piper Was Not Paid

The rampant rats made everyone afraid. As they multiplied, trepidation stayed. At first, there was no one who could be found to free the village from rats that abound. In the town, was there anyone around? Along came a piper with a haunting sound. He approached people with temerity. “I shall play the sounds that will make you free. As the rats listen to my melody, they will leave your town as they follow me. For my services, there is a large fee. I will rid you of your problem; you’ll see!” Soon, the rats all disappeared magically. Not one rat was in the vicinity. However, when the piper asked for pay, the townspeople told him to go away. “We find there’s no need for compensation. Nothing’s in writing, no obligation.” This breach of contract made the piper cross. “People of this town, you will incur loss.” His melody took the children away. No one saw them again after that day.

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  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:13:00 PM
    Good re-do of the Pied Piper, well done. Lee

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:48:00 PM
    I really like this Robert, it reads like a creative story, did you make this up, because if you did, your good, you should consider writing a children's story with this, enjoyed. hugs vie

    Pettit Avatar Robert Pettit
    Date: 10/9/2012 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is based on the old fairy tale of the Pied Piper of Hamelin. I believe it was written by the Brothers Grimm.