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When the party is over

I felt like venting, releasing steam
Almost like reflecting a dream
People blend and people go
Still I don't pretend to know

You change and I hit the floor
These chains just weigh more
If we close the blinds and hide
I suppose they won't mind

Kick everyone out, it's too loud
Pull the curtains, end it now
Put on pink or just the mink
I need a drink so I can think

They say love has a sweetness 
But it's not above a wet kiss
I'll treat you right and dim the lights
It's just us tonight, forgetting fights

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 4:01:00 PM
    You write with open heart and honesty, I like that in a writer, have a great evening it was a pleasure reading your work, xxx

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Congratulations, Mitch. Your winning write can speak for many red blooded men.... Jake

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:22:00 PM
    most enjoyable congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Hello Mitch, stopping by this one again... thank you for enjoying my campfire poem... yes I have a wild side... hahaha! Now I own 4 cars, and i figure my wild side is crazy and loves wasting money like crazy... anyways -Congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:21:00 AM
    Interesting winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Mitch nicely written. Co granulation a on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 9:46:00 AM
    an attitude well written. Mitch its always great to be what we are.loved the write (:cJenish.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:40:00 PM
    yes, hit the lights and get everybody out of there!!! Loved that part about wearing pink. or just wear mink!! An entertaining poem.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:29:00 AM
    Perfect !! That wonderful blend of love and frustration, mixed with a bit of passion. First time I am stopping by your site.. will read more.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:27:00 AM
    crazy how we can easily forget in one moment to another, enjoyed your ~always, Linda