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When the Chips Are Heavy

Minus 200 points she thought! How disgusting he could be, clinging to his older ones like he wasn't old enough to make his decisions himself. Let's wait for them he said, like choosing between rice and pasta will change d world. Give them space she said, hating d puppy dog movement, despising d very fact that she couldn't take a step without him thinking he was straying too far from the clan. U grumble too much he said, but immediately agrees when the others said d same as she had. Now its decision time, how much can she truly take?? She's had enough of been tied to someone that was holding on for his dear life at his mother's apron.

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Date: 1/13/2013 7:18:00 AM
Lulu a big welcome to the soup, breaking away is never easy, I like it...David
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:49:00 PM
Welcome to Soup! If you need any help please don't hesitate to ask...Light & Love
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