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When Santa Came

I couldn’t go to sleep on this Christmas I knew Santa would be coming tonight There were noises downstairs, I yelped for joy Could it be him, were his reindeer on the roof I heard talking and a jolly ole laugh But was it really him, I wanted to know for sure I slipped off my bed, walked quietly down the hall I looked at the tree, but I saw nothing But the presents were all there that Santa left And the stockings were stuffed to the brim Not wanting to get caught out of my bed I ran to my room with a giant smile on my face I knew Santa had come, I saw what he left behind I fell asleep that night with the biggest smile And I had the warmest heart that I’ve ever had
Entrant into craig cornish's "Fond Memories" contest 11/20/2012

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:07:00 AM
    congrats on your win friend Russell :) cheers!!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:21:00 AM
    Thank you Russell--oh to be a kid again!!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:51:00 AM
    congrats Russell luv on an excellent write and win for fond memories .. an outstanding work of art my friend .. so enjoyed this creative endeavor my friend ..

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:51:00 AM
    Big Congratulations Russell xx

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:49:00 PM
    this one is the sweetest one on the list. Congrats,Russell. YOu did very well.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:49:00 PM
    This is such an awesome description of the excitement of being a child on Christmas. Big congratulations on a well-deserved win!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:00:00 PM

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:36:00 PM will be the sweetest child ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 1:35:00 PM
    my two newest poems are Winterglow Reminisce for craig redone on 11/3 old poem erased and Joe Willie Namath Clerihew also redone on a poem two weeks or less ago on my list luv if u care to read .. am not posting anything brand new for now..

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 1:32:00 PM
    a wonderful spirited write on the anticipation of a child's fantasy Russell luv .. best of luck for this magically woven work of art my friend .. happy thanksgiving ..

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 8:50:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:16:00 PM
    a memory to last a lifetime, russell... fantastic wordings and great pacing of thoughts, images make this page shine... much enjoyed with glee... could you clarify what the phrase "we the biggest smile" mean... wow stuff with winning huggs!..:)

    Sivey Avatar Russell Sivey
    Date: 11/20/2012 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was suppoed to be "with" instead of "we", thanks for the catch!
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 2:19:00 PM
    awww, lovely nostalgic write, my friend

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 12:52:00 PM
    A very sweet Christmas memory. Nice job :)