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comets race words multiple then multiple again a blur really like fine dust light years ahead some words uttered angelic a few lost in flames but all disappeared alive somewhere ending the conversation like earth began with power to reverse waterfalls flooding tongues that pant with hate sowing oats or confetti however proper one can propose... beyond event horizon © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/25/2013 4:25:00 PM
I'm roundly confounded ... but wait...I'll figure it
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Date: 11/27/2012 1:54:00 AM
you do have the power to reverse waterfalls flooding tongues that pant with hate with your blissful poetic spirit and grace ..
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Date: 11/26/2012 2:48:00 PM
a very interesting one for message and format as well. event horizon! Cool!!
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Date: 11/9/2012 8:28:00 PM
James, love the ending , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD
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Date: 11/9/2012 1:48:00 PM
very cryptic, jimbo... a puzzle that i want to savor in free verse style, like a universe bursting or a loss of someone... grrreat stuff!..:) huggs!
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Date: 11/9/2012 11:32:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it as always Jimbo. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2012 6:27:00 AM
James, thanks for your nice poem - easy to like. - Have a really good weekend. - (Here we have lots of rain and wind, cold and wet) oxox a hug to you. - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/9/2012 5:50:00 AM
nice one Jimbo xx
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Date: 11/9/2012 5:39:00 AM
enjoyed, love elizabeth
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