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When Love Is No More

Before your face is tinged with light of dawn Before the curtains of our love are drawn Before the gleam in your eye turns to grey Before the wonder slowly slips away Before I taste apathy in your kiss Before passion from our bed is amiss Before a loveless night conquers the day Before winged devotion flies far away While yet you crave for my manna so sweet While you long with kisses my mouth to greet While desire yet ignites you to flame While raging hunger will not be tame Now as you sleep, I will slip out of the door To spare me the pain, when love is no more Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2013 9:03:00 AM

Hello Sweet Eileen, have yourself a lovely evening with your loving family. take your time... xox~ Linda

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/19/2013 12:59:00 PM

Thank, sweetie! They are gone now...had me a good cry over several things...Not a good night....I don't do well alone and I'll be alone for the next ten days almost....Hmmmmmmm....Oh well, we must survive. thanks for the visit. You are kind and sweet. HUGS

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/19/2013 3:47:00 AM

Hello everyone!!! PLEASE forgive me for not being able to answer each one of you individually. My life has been chaotic recently...1) Semester begins Monday...been to meetings in preparation 2) Out of internet connection at home...waiting for that to be reactivated 3) my husband and daughter are traveling to Cyprus tonight...spending time wtih them getting them ready and weeping!! Thank you for your comments, I've read each and every one! I will get back on when I can..HUGS to you ALL!

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/18/2013 6:17:00 PM

You martyr haha , had to say that my little Desert Orchid, however, this a very beautiful write, touchingly sensitive. Take care, Richard

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/18/2013 2:06:00 AM

Thrilling piece throughout. I was engorged with each word. You put me in awe with your work! Lovely piece! You rock! Always, Laura

Chris Boskovski

Date: 9/17/2013 10:05:00 PM

Such a poem that has hooked my heart! Such a touching poem! I love it... Check out my newest poems I hope you enjoy them! Great poem Eileen! signed from your fellow poet. Christopher Boskovski! xoxoxo :) hugs and kisses all around for you my lovely Eileen!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/17/2013 6:47:00 PM

great poem with a very poignant ending. guess the speaker has been hurt pretty badly...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/17/2013 5:37:00 PM

True love will endure, no need to rush out the door.