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When Its All a Blur

I forgot my contacts Under the tip of my toes I forgot my sight Along my life's road I forgot how it felt When warmth laid upon me I forgot what earnest was What it was like to see good I forgot my mom’s womb Is it where I’m from? I forgot what an apple taste like I won’t have another one I forgot emotions, expressions It’s all a blur... Wait! In that blur... I think I just so the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/30/2009 3:50:00 AM
Beautiful. Creative. Funny. Love It <3 Boo
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Date: 6/29/2009 4:16:00 PM
powerful words, and beautifully expressed.
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Date: 6/29/2009 1:29:00 PM
Like the 2nd stanza. Like it all, actually. What if we stopped doing the things we do. That would be a huge withdrawl fest. I don't think anyone can handle a change that big.
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Date: 6/28/2009 9:49:00 AM
beautifully expressed
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Date: 6/27/2009 9:43:00 PM
I know these moments and can never express it any better. You are a true poet.
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Date: 6/27/2009 2:28:00 PM
This write is one thing that most writes are not orginal great flow to it all around strong poem great job
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Date: 6/27/2009 12:11:00 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. A bit of humor to make me smile. Keep on writing! Karen
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