When Is Good Morning Lucky Day Coming ?

How can i survive when i can barely peak 
And so i cried and cried for weeks 
The bitter part it's yet unspoken 
But yes the reality had to be taken 

Angel took away my sorrow 
And made me believe in a better tomorrow 
In the genesis i was really hopeless 
But i began to flow with nature and so i got happiness 

I know in life there comes a time weeping 
And nevertheless the time for wishing 
And so the sun went down softly 
Another night is here again, i breathe slowly 

My art is full of bitter compassion 
Now how do i tell of my dream-my vision

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/17/2024 11:52:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/6/2016 2:48:00 PM
Garnua, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:50:00 PM
GRNUA, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:56:00 AM
Hello Garnua: WOW!!! What an emotional and wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Peace: Sheol
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Date: 2/26/2010 4:47:00 PM
I'm so glad an "Angel" took away your sorrow, Garnua. You have a gift for words so you should have no trouble sharing your "dream" with us. Beautiful writing! Welcome to Poetry Soup. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:56:00 PM
Very touching words! Good poem.
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Garnua. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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