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when i wrote those 3 words to you

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when i wrote those 3 words to you

when i wrote those 3 words to you
i meant for them to be an innocent sign of my affection
little did i know that it would change my entire life as i know it
when i said those 3 words, you looked me in the eyes and said in return
"i love you too"

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  1. Date: 2/11/2010 11:43:00 AM
    this is a good one and it is funny how one four letter over used over rated word can change everything! good write it was sweet. =)

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 9:12:00 AM
    How touching

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 8:59:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry with us today Dani. Love, Carol