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When I Meet You

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When I Meet You

Wind blows the branches
Crimson leaves fall;
Dark shadows dance
On the sunlit wall.

The wind softly whispers
Secrets to the trees;
Then I'm reminded
Of much more than these.

In the grey twilight
When ever I meet you;
The trees are more crimson
And the sky is more blue.

When the wind calls her song
In forgotten skies;
Would it be wrong
If we were not wise?

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  1. Date: 5/26/2012 9:47:00 PM
    Simple words beautifully crafted into a most pleasurable piece. BRAVO Elizabeth! :)

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 9:52:00 AM
    beautifully writen. heres a name that your going to love Ian Petch. he's on the soup and has a way with words. excelent work.

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:56:00 PM
    Were vwe wise? Depends were the memories worth it.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 8:09:00 PM
    your like the wind that mesmerized me with your caressing touching words elizabeth. one of a kind. thanks for the visit and thank you also for that 'pretty special' part. LoL, i rarely hear nor realized that.

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 1:12:00 PM
    so mesmerizing ...eliza! I loved this too

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 10:52:00 AM
    * "'WHEN I MEET YOU' * I AM GOING KISSSS YOU * DEEEEPLY * MY LUV, FOREVER * SARAH." *

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 8:52:00 AM
    * “Your Lovely Beauties Coms Inspired Myself * Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth * Sooo Much That I Had to Rebrush, Yet * There Is Sooo Beauty Inside These Glittering Walls At PoetrySoup * Whom Can Point Unto Merely Beautiful Flower * As The Fragrance Which Fills Their Heart With Such A Sweet Aroma * I Love This Jewel of Beauty In Priceless Verse * When I Meet You * Makes My Heart Flutter * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 10:44:00 AM
    you are a master poet,,,,and i see in your writing such thought,,,thank you for inspiring me,,,

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 7:59:00 PM
    Greatly done! For you do not short change your fellow readers my friend; And you too likely inspire many others.

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 10:18:00 AM
    romance love, what are we poet without it... Enjoyed this a lot, Elizabeth. Thanx for stopping by my page.. xo

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 11:54:00 AM
    Many ways i find in this many ways and inspiration...

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 4:07:00 AM
    A lovely romantic poem from you Elizabeth.Very nice rhyming.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 8:43:00 PM
    This is why I am so in awe of you...your soft beautiful touch of romanticsm with words in melodic rhythmic form. A lovely introduction to this piece with an artistic captivating questioning line at the end. Wish I could visit the Soup more but work is heavy for me. Know that I always love your words LIZ!

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 6:54:00 PM
    Elizabeth, I wrote my entry for Constance's contest and chose Elizabeth Barrett Browning. If you can, please check it out. If you read the last line my "about this poem", you'll see I dedicated it to you. You remind me of her... your earnest romantism blended with words that often reveal a genuine sadness that shines with hope. I so love reading your work. I never know what to expect from you next. Cheers, Cyndi. PS... aren't we all too often wise, when we should just give in and be the fool?

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 3:07:00 PM
    And softly breezes wisper soon. Perhaps when warmth returns in june. Then winters chill and a cold dark heart. Will melt away and let love start. And birds will sing in skies anew. To tell the lovers what to do. And with their hearts, they'll share a dream. And again, things won't be as bad as they seem.

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 1:20:00 PM
    Elizabeth sometimes ignorance brings more joy I guess.. okay that is just my weird thinking.. :) Enjoyed this tremendously tonight.. Hope the week has been good to you :) tc Wilma

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 11:43:00 AM
    The last line makes me wonder.... Another home run from you, dear Liz. I wish you a blessed weekend.

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 10:16:00 AM
    Very nice! Keep it flowing :-)

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 9:28:00 AM
    Smile, *^_^* “Crimson, Can Represent Many Different Things My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Friend Elizabeth! * Wisdom, Can Also Be Interpreted Amid Many Different Views But, In The End There Is The Overriding Truth, That Shall Gather It All * What Is Wisdom to Myself Yet Love &, Once More But A Flowing River In Depth & Rhyme; Kudos & Kudos!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 8:26:00 AM
    An irresistible write dear poet ! Wonderful job Elizabeth ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

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