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When I close my eyes

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When I close my eyes

Have you ever had a dream where....
It’s the most scariest ever?
You’re sweating. Really sweating.
Unable to move
You cry for help
Nothing happens
You awake. Relieved!
It’s only a dream

Or have you ever had a dream where....
It’s the most comforting ever
You’re happy. Really happy.
Unable to express
You tell everyone
Everyone is so pleased
You awake. Horrified!
It’s only a dream....

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  1. Date: 2/23/2009 11:15:00 PM
    I like this write and the way it has the opposite outcome at the end of each stanza. Very clever.

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 8:12:00 AM
    Great poem

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 4:44:00 AM
    I like this read very much as it speaks well of dreams and how they truly affect our lives. Very clear and flowicng. Michael

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 4:13:00 AM
    if if only a dream... i will be glad! nice one ~ Arany