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When I (Unconditionally)

When I think of you, I want to speak to you When I talk to you, I wish to see you When our eyes connect, I long to kiss you When our kiss concludes, I desperately miss you When I express my feelings, I expose myself to you When I share my thoughts, I feel much closer to you When our hands meet, I sensually anticipate you When our bodies fuse, I emotionally escape with you When I am not in your presence, I place my trust in you When I am tested vigorously, I unconditionally love you {Des Juan Marquise}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/31/2010 11:35:00 AM
such a provocative write you should ry it without the "When I's" for who else would be speaking & then others can more easily imagine themselves in your place! We miss you!!! Light & Love
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Date: 6/21/2009 9:49:00 AM
as usual you pull me into your writes, it gives one a sense of peace and tranqulity, take care D-nyce
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Date: 6/21/2009 9:48:00 AM
hi Des Juan, good to hear from you again as you can see I have not been on the soup for a while, I have been busy going back to school still writing, but i have not actually posted any poems in the soup lately, thanks for your generous comments, they mean alot, how have you been, I hope that everything is well with you, how is your son, well I hope, I bet you are still a workaholic, lol take care D-nyce
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Date: 6/11/2009 4:58:00 AM
Love this one!espacially the lines:"When our eyes connect, I long to kiss you When our kiss concludes, I desperately miss you " It tells so much!Gone to my favs!:)
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Date: 6/5/2009 1:20:00 PM
Des Jaun, this is softly touching, and I am sure that special one knows she is special with your talented words that sings from the page. Thank you for your kind comments always.
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Date: 6/5/2009 1:33:00 AM
Des Juan, This tribute to your love is sweetly special. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/4/2009 1:39:00 PM
so sweet and romantic you are a gentleman and a nice poet thanks for the comment
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