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When God Speaks In Whispers

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When God Speaks In Whispers

Sometimes I steal away to a quiet place and seek my Heavenly Father’s face.
In his presence I find the peace to calm my troubled mind. 
He walks with me on green garden paths and by Blue Mountain streams.
I hear his still soft voice whisper in the sound of rippling streams
 and in the whisper of the pine trees.
Ever listening for my call, around me his mercy drops fall.
When I bow beneath my heavy load and tears streak my face
He is always there with a warm embrace.
When God speaks in whispers I can see his love all around 

For Brian Strand's contest: Any theme

Copyright © Lori Lucas McClure

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 12:25:00 AM
    I love this ;}

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 10:21:00 AM
    Blissful lines :) even in obstables God is present!

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 1:38:00 AM
    Lori. really a nice piece here ...enjoyed the read God bless, Kurt

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 12:21:00 PM
    Wisdom comes with what we hear in the elements. God is everywhere, the sounds in moving water, the rustle of the leaves and the breath of air we breath. Good job Jim

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 12:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Your Choice Once More contest Lori. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 1:22:00 AM
    LORI, CONGRATULATIONS, in BRIANS ;-) contest,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:22:00 PM
    How beautiful. Gosh, you could have entered t his one in that last contest of Frank's about prayers! congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 5:11:00 PM
    congrats to you Lori onb this contemplative piece and high win

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 3:52:00 PM
    Lori, this is so pastoral and reminds me of a paper I am writing for literature class right's on the Psalms and its place in literature. You draw to a reverent mood and to the places where the authors probably wrote the original text from. This is so wonderfully constructed--and the ending is a pink pretty bow. Congrats on a special win. Gwendolen

    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 11/11/2011 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you draw me to a reverent mood....
  1. Date: 11/11/2011 9:33:00 AM
    Congrats Lori on a superb first place win luv..

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 2:09:00 PM
    I like the first line - Jesus said, "Go into your closet," Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 12:07:00 PM
    * “Owww * The Indiscribable Beauty Amid Such A Blessing * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Lori * What Could Compare * To The Greatest Love of They All * Peaceful In Serenity * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 7:03:00 AM
    yes... i can see HIS love all around. i love this.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:53:00 PM
    Lori, this is truly inspirational. Love it! Kim

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 6:35:00 PM
    I enjoyed your prayer, I love how you have connected it to nature and God. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 5:24:00 PM
    Yes, this sounds like a close walk with God..It is good that we still have these places to enjoy on the earth and be able to commune with God and nature..Very descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara