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When Fate Decides

When fate decides to bring you love Look to the sky and thank the stars above Your love is an amazing gift that money can't buy May your marriage always be like the fourth of July Hold tightly to each other and never let go Nourish your love and make it grow Be spontaneous, be silly and laugh a lot Let no one ever undo your love knot Never go to bed frustrated or upset Communicate to ward off any threat Storms will brew; the key is to ride them out Patience and forgiveness is what love is about Value your time together like it is gold Happiness received will be twofold Respect and be honest with one another Give each other space; do not smother Prioritize and keep each other at the top of your list When apart tell the other how much they're missed In no way should you take each other for granted Always remember why you both became enchanted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/14/2013 8:58:00 PM
Cecilia , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:47:00 AM
Words of wisdom, definately worth the effort!
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:22:00 PM
A good rhyme of love, and it's foundations
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Date: 9/19/2012 7:22:00 PM
These are words that will keep a marriage strong. :o) Very nice...
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Date: 9/15/2012 8:25:00 PM
Nice poem that needs a few touch-ups: 1st verse, 4th line: "forth" should be "Fourth" 2nd verse, 1st line: "tight" should be "tightly" 3rd verse, 3rd line: replace comma with a semicolon. 4th verse, 4th line: same as above. 5th verse, 2nd line: "their" is either "they're" or "they are". Your poem has a better chance with these suggested improvements.
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Date: 9/15/2012 2:47:00 PM
"Be spontaneous, be silly and laugh a lot" this phrase struck home with me! A brilliant write my dear Cecillia! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:14:00 AM
Cecilia, this is a lovely poem - 50% + 50% = 100% LOVE! - Wish you luck in contest. - Have a lovely weekend - oxox big hug / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2012 3:52:00 AM
Very nice Cecilia.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 9/14/2012 7:54:00 PM
this is one of the best I have seen. You went into great detail on the "do's" which I only glossed over in my own poem. NICE!!!
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