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When Fate Decides

When fate decides to bring you love, the brightest stars align above. To fill each heart with eternal light, to guide both through dark tunnels of night. As sunbeams showering in gold, create a glow of hope foretold. Yes, love's written in brilliant skies of sun and moon, never to die; Of constellations bold and bright, of cherished days beyond our sight. When fate unites two hearts who dare to vow true love, honor and bare their souls creating a new life, a family's born of husband, wife. A promise to love for all time, long after each are past their prime. As shooting stars blaze overhead, fate's kiss unites two hearts now wed. When fate decides to bring you love, each dazzling star shines from above. A bond of love shines for all to see starting the moment you marry me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/14/2014 4:23:00 PM
Very sweet.
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Date: 4/14/2014 12:24:00 PM
Lovely poem. Gives the warm fuzzies ;)
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Janette's "When Fate Decides" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 7:34:00 PM
Loved the use of line repetition! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 9/30/2012 4:43:00 PM
Awesome and excellent piece,Rhonda...Great write..Congrats on your superb win...It is well deserved...
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Date: 9/10/2012 4:02:00 PM
I think Fate as just decided i read this, wow, fate's never been wrong yet, and sure isn't this time.
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:11:00 PM
you put this write together beautifully, enjoyed your write Rhonda,...p.d.
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:36:00 AM
Awww, now this is a truly beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed the tenderness you exude within this glorious poem! You have pieced together wondrous words of loving bliss and heartfelt desires between two in such loving beauty! What a wonderful write Rhonda, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:16:00 AM
Rhonda, this one really has me stuck. I wrote something a bit like this but I see you added more pizzazz with the imagery of the shooting stars, etc. I can't believe this one is so hard for me to do. I think you have a great chance to place high with yours. Meanwhile, I am starting all over and trying it again!!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/10/2012 12:04:00 AM
beautiful Rhonda well done, a really beautiful poem xx
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