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When Earth Is Chastised By Rain

She exhales her guilt After sordid tears of remorse Her conscience is rinsed.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/23/2009 3:35:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Oluwaseun and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:37:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:39:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2009 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Oluwaseun. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2009 4:25:00 PM

very interesting personification! Light & Love

Robin Maughan

Date: 11/30/2009 11:51:00 AM

Great feature! I love Haikus! Hugs, Robin

James Fraser

Date: 11/30/2009 11:34:00 AM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured >> James

John Freeman

Date: 11/30/2009 9:00:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Oluwaseun. Congratulation on your feature, this week. Sincerely, Moses

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/30/2009 5:42:00 AM

Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/29/2009 6:56:00 PM

Aweaome write ! congrats on being featured!

Date: 11/29/2009 2:56:00 PM

Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/27/2009 2:14:00 PM

Nice poem. pls consider 5/7/5 cylab. Pls re-entry as :After sordid tears' remorse. Am looking forward to reading more of your poems.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/25/2009 5:54:00 PM

excellent personification too! Light & Love