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When Earth is chastised by rain

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When Earth is chastised by rain

She exhales her guilt
After sordid tears of remorse
Her conscience is rinsed.

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  1. Date: 12/23/2009 3:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on being a first round survivor Oluwaseun and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:37:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 11:39:00 AM
    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 4:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Oluwaseun. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 4:25:00 PM
    very interesting personification! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 11:51:00 AM
    Great feature! I love Haikus! Hugs, Robin

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 11:34:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your poem being featured >> James

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 9:00:00 AM
    Beautiful Haiku, Oluwaseun. Congratulation on your feature, this week. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 5:42:00 AM
    Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W.

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 6:56:00 PM
    Aweaome write ! congrats on being featured!

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 2:56:00 PM
    Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 2:14:00 PM
    Nice poem. pls consider 5/7/5 cylab. Pls re-entry as :After sordid tears' remorse. Am looking forward to reading more of your poems.

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 5:54:00 PM
    excellent personification too! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 9:05:00 PM
    Excellent Haiku(or Senryu?)!! Brilliant four lines ....because the title is also amazing! Oluwaseun: this is GREAT! (May I call you Olu?) have a nice day. : ) Ruben.