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when autumn comes

here, where I walk,
confused silence swirls around my feet,
and the anguished summer leaves
are lingering limp, waiting for autumn...,
waiting to crumble and mingle with earth
drunk with the morning dew

somewhere beneath them
under the thunder
earth wears the scab of a fresh wound
in a place that will not be forgotten...
corrupt with mourning
sprouting with questions
immersed with regret
hollowed with anger
and shadowed by trees of despair

birch-bark faces, heads bent low, shadowed eyes
stone-cold voices, carried in the wind, behind disguise
while mute birds watch without a song
the leaves will decay, green goes, and the eye forgets
forget?  never....
while pawing on the hard and bitter earth
of reason, is impossible...

autumn comes
and autumn goes
I will live in hope that baffled minds
will clearly see a winter sun
and give up blaming ... who?



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  1. Date: 2/22/2015 6:48:00 PM
    Stopping back with my congratulations, Carrie, for your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra

  1. Date: 2/22/2015 5:50:00 PM
    Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 2/22/2015 4:14:00 PM
    dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 2/22/2015 4:09:00 PM
    Carrie, Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE

  1. Date: 12/26/2014 11:12:00 PM
    CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda

  1. Date: 12/24/2014 3:10:00 PM
    Wonderful, deep poem, Carrie. The cycle of seasons, and of life...very meaningful profound thoughts. A top place winner for me. 7 +Fav. Hugs, Sandra

  1. Date: 12/24/2014 2:22:00 AM
    I am finding reading the poems oh so difficult yet i love your take on the theme the passing of a season - I loved the imagery - fabulous write my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:02:00 PM
    sweet win ..........SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Carrie, I'm seeing this poem all over the place... ha ha.. it was one of the best flower poems.. interesting ending by the way... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 12:11:00 AM
    Hello Carrie... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:47:00 PM
    Perfection indeed…Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Greatness becomes you. Congrats!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 1:31:00 PM
    Excellent poem an congrats on your 1st place....well-deserved....great metaphor use here! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:56:00 AM
    I agree. Age often turns a person's thoughts away from blame and reason. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Carrie, congrat on your wonderful first place win!! One of my favorite poems from your pen, I enjoy reading again and again. Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Congrats on the first place win the contest.carrie

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 1:59:00 AM
    I'm o glad to read this very beautiful and excellent poem of yours my dear friend Carrie. Thank you so much for sharing! My big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:30:00 PM
    congrats on this WOW poem of yours, Carrie!!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:17:00 PM
    This could well be a classic, sweetheart. Congratulations on a beautiful entry... Well deserved win.... Jake

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:06:00 PM
    stunning poem with its beautifully penned images dancing gracefully across the page...congrats on your win :)

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