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When Autumn Comes

Confused silence swirls around my feet, and the anguished summer leaves, drunk with the morning dew, are lingering limp. Waiting for autumn Preparing to crumble and mingle with earth Somewhere beneath them under the thunder and a tremulous sky earth wears the scabs of old wounds There are places that can't be forgotten... corrupt with mourning sprouting with questions immersed with regret hollowed with anger and shadowed by trees of despair Birch-bark faces, heads bent low, shadowed eyes stone-cold voices, are carried in the wind, held captive behind disguise Mute birds watch without a song The leaves will decay, green goes, and the eye forgets But can the heart forget? Never.... How does one walk away while pawing on the hard and bitter earth of reason, remains impossible...? Autumn comes and autumn goes I can only live in hope that baffled minds will clearly see a winter sun and give up blaming ... who? _________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/23/2016 9:38:00 AM
An excellent piece, I see why Linda honoured this one. Congrats and Mettu Christmas.
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Date: 12/20/2016 11:31:00 PM
I understood it's a painful poem, but nonetheless a very beautiful one. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/20/2016 10:19:00 PM
Carrie this poem of yours is a masterpiece. Congrats! A 7
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Date: 12/20/2016 3:28:00 PM
Carrie, Nice to read you again, even if it's in a poem that was almost familiar when reading it. I thank you for entering my contest with a poem that left me wanting a bit more... LOL, yes, I want more, and I am looking forward and hoping you join my new contest. Congratulations on your awesome win, stop by and share a little smile on my blog, "FEED ME." ----"happy holidays" Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/18/2016 8:19:00 PM
Mrs Carrie, my interpretation is that perhaps someone has passed (earth wears the scab of a fresh wound) and you are dealing with grief. Close?
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:48:00 PM
Stopping back with my congratulations, Carrie, for your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:50:00 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:14:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 4:09:00 PM
Carrie, Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:12:00 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda
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Date: 12/24/2014 3:10:00 PM
Wonderful, deep poem, Carrie. The cycle of seasons, and of life...very meaningful profound thoughts. A top place winner for me. 7 +Fav. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/24/2014 2:22:00 AM
I am finding reading the poems oh so difficult yet i love your take on the theme the passing of a season - I loved the imagery - fabulous write my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:02:00 PM
sweet win ..........SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:55:00 PM
Carrie, I'm seeing this poem all over the place... ha ha.. it was one of the best flower poems.. interesting ending by the way... always~ Linda
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Date: 10/20/2013 12:11:00 AM
Hello Carrie... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 10/15/2013 4:47:00 PM
Perfection indeed…Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2013 2:08:00 PM
Greatness becomes you. Congrats!
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:56:00 AM
I agree. Age often turns a person's thoughts away from blame and reason. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:12:00 AM
Carrie, congrat on your wonderful first place win!! One of my favorite poems from your pen, I enjoy reading again and again. Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:34:00 AM
Congrats on the first place win the contest.carrie
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Date: 10/15/2013 1:59:00 AM
I'm o glad to read this very beautiful and excellent poem of yours my dear friend Carrie. Thank you so much for sharing! My big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/14/2013 11:30:00 PM
congrats on this WOW poem of yours, Carrie!!!
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Date: 10/14/2013 8:17:00 PM
This could well be a classic, sweetheart. Congratulations on a beautiful entry... Well deserved win.... Jake
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Date: 10/14/2013 8:06:00 PM
stunning poem with its beautifully penned images dancing gracefully across the page...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/14/2013 4:03:00 AM
Hello Carrie! I am new on this perfect site and i like your poem! Autumn is one of the most beautiful and romantic season...thanks!!! ;) RitaSolisRadius.
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