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What's on your mind

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What's on your mind

What's on your mind tell me something what's your thoughts what's the deal
your mind seems motionless your mind seems still I'm waiting for a thought of
expression as we sit still just guessing I just want to know what's happening 

maybe sometime soon you'll open up you'll bloom until then I'll sit here in gloom
I want to know where are you why are you so out of reach why is your thoughts 
so lost so deep someday I hope to find you so we can reconnect so we can share

maybe one day we can talk the way we use to so that we can relate to each other
the way we use to until then I'll wait I'm here waiting for that bright ray of the way 
we use to be

won't wait too long 


My love


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  1. Date: 4/9/2012 10:46:00 AM
    it feels just like a loss when you are in the other position trying to find your words and can't.

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 4:54:00 AM
    Strong write my dear friend... Your words are real and so touching...and your comments on mine brought much smiles, your to kind..luv Michael

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 3:15:00 PM
    hohum duldrums in a life....get a exploder nerf gun and chase him ...hehe just teasing....enjoyed reading your poetic work...well done