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What's Bliss

The sun is setting and it paints the sky a hearty scarlet, Imagine yourself walking barefoot along the beach and the wet sand squishing between your toes, Close your eyes and listen to the waves lapping the shore, Take a deep breath of salty air and let go of your cares--Ha, this is Bliss! 10 or less lines contest by rob carmack

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Date: 10/16/2015 9:39:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-
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Date: 10/16/2015 7:59:00 PM
Love it! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/15/2015 9:47:00 AM
Abdul, I'm right there in my dreams. Live in Florida, haven't been the beach in two years.
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Date: 10/15/2015 2:16:00 AM
Congrats on superb win abdul with this wonderful write!
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Date: 10/14/2015 9:40:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/14/2015 8:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win withthis superb poem my friend! A7
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