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What Would You Do

I would fly with storm clouds just so I could meet you
I would run with hungry lions just to get there faster
I would swim through broken glass just to find your heart
I don’t want to lose you

I would walk on hot coals just to see your face
I would jump on a bed of spikes just to hear your voice
I would lap a million race cars just to prove I love you
I don’t want to lose you

The torture you put me through is killing me
Crazy thing is I like it
I barely know you, but you’re always on my mind
I don’t want to lose you

I want to tell you in person
But you don’t know I exist
I don’t want to lose you

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  1. Date: 9/3/2011 11:24:00 PM
    I like the feel of this, very subtle yet passionate. Good work here!

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 11:02:00 PM
    Devin, CONGRATULATIONS !! On your poem being featured this week. Stopping by to read every poem on the home page. have yourself a wonderful week,..Linda

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 11:44:00 AM
    congrats devin on your featured pome this week on PS.. a great one to share luv..

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 10:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Devin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 1:13:00 PM
    superbly penned with my best CONGRATS on your big win, devin! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 4:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "New Free Verse"Devin . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 3:42:00 AM
    Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, with this wonderful Free Verse, Devin. Elaine

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 7:33:00 PM
    The repetition adds to the overall effect. Nicely done. Congratulations on your win, Devin~!

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 3:23:00 PM
    Congrats Devin on your excellent win with this dynamic delight in poetry luv.. enjoy a top ten sweet success with luv..