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What the Spring Sprung

Tonight I thought passion would bring But not in the shape of a bed spring The very moment I peaked I felt what was breached Now I am so very hampered in upswing ~*~ For Francine's "Wow Me in 5 Lines" contest ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/22/2011 3:57:00 PM
Jim I just started to read Your poems and I think indeed Your limerick style Sure makes me smile But the free verse just insn't my speed
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Date: 4/25/2011 12:42:00 PM
That's a riot, James! "Hampered in your upswing" is a witty way to describe it. I've been away for a while but am back now. Sorry I missed so much, but I needed a break. Still having some health problems -- heart and nerve disorders. Will learn more after the EKG on May 5. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:46:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Best wishes in the contest. Happy Easter! Karen
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Date: 4/22/2011 12:21:00 PM
a very good write James, enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:02:00 PM
Well James this will surely WOW Francine.. superb words and great title and thought ...good luck in the contest ..luv..
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:46:00 AM
I'm trying to read as many of your pieces as possible, you have a few, bear with me while I try to read them all
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:55:00 PM
Cute title for this funny little limerick, James. I enjoyed your comment to that one blog tonight too. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:10:00 PM
Funny and humorous, James. Good luck in the contest,
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:09:00 PM
Yes, thanks james for calling young man, I am a young man of 76. Thanks
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Date: 4/18/2011 1:13:00 PM
haha good one lol :-)
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