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What the Spring Sprung

Tonight I thought passion would bring
But not in the shape of a bed spring
The very moment I peaked
I felt what was breached
Now I am so very hampered in upswing

~*~ For Francine's "Wow Me in 5 Lines" contest ~*~

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  1. Date: 5/22/2011 3:57:00 PM
    Jim I just started to read Your poems and I think indeed Your limerick style Sure makes me smile But the free verse just insn't my speed

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 12:42:00 PM
    That's a riot, James! "Hampered in your upswing" is a witty way to describe it. I've been away for a while but am back now. Sorry I missed so much, but I needed a break. Still having some health problems -- heart and nerve disorders. Will learn more after the EKG on May 5. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 12:21:00 PM
    a very good write James, enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 9:02:00 PM
    Well James this will surely WOW Francine.. superb words and great title and thought ...good luck in the contest ..luv..

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 11:46:00 AM
    I'm trying to read as many of your pieces as possible, you have a few, bear with me while I try to read them all

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 11:55:00 PM
    Cute title for this funny little limerick, James. I enjoyed your comment to that one blog tonight too. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 3:10:00 PM
    Funny and humorous, James. Good luck in the contest,

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 3:09:00 PM
    Yes, thanks james for calling young man, I am a young man of 76. Thanks

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 1:13:00 PM
    haha good one lol :-)