What Should I Write

WHAT SHOULD I WRITE! Oops, sorry to shout It's been happening lately I'm losing my clout It once was a breeze Writing one after t'other Out they'd all pour In rhymes I did smother Then hit a brick wall Broke my head bone for sure My mind got all fuzzy Felt quite insecure Babbling in gibberish Bout the craziest of things Of goulies and stuff My mind's in a sling If you have some ideas Please pass them along I'll pay you big dollars Might sing you a song Cathie says folks Better turn down your tuner He's a lovable guy But he sure ain't no crooner WHAT SHOULD I WRITE! © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 4/5/2013 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Jack! I like the twists and turns in a lot of your work.
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Michael! Good to hear... I try not to churn out the same old stuff! My main aim is to have fun and hope everyone else has some fun too! Thanks again... Jack
Date: 4/2/2013 2:45:00 PM
I like caleb's idea..childhood idea...let's see? Were you born before dirt? Kidding? Old saying my mom says!!!! What pets have you had? Lol Donna
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Date: 4/3/2013 6:26:00 AM
"born before dirt!" LOL You sure know how to hurt a guy! "pets"... you mean young filly type pets??? Hugs and love, Jack xxx
Date: 4/2/2013 10:10:00 AM
Haha....good question. Lately I've been writing about childhood memories
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Date: 4/3/2013 6:22:00 AM
Ya... me too, along with some naughty stuff! LOL
Date: 4/2/2013 9:05:00 AM
The guy on NPR radio writes about minnesota... I write about Troll Lake... I know... you can write about... ME.... ssnicker...LOL...ROTFLMAO... What's Santa Land like up there where you are?... LOL (Maybe not about me... It might make the dragon jealous... And my roses already have a migraine... LOL)
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Date: 4/3/2013 6:20:00 AM
Seems like your dragons and trolls are famous all over the site! LOL Check out Russell's comments! No snow up here but freaking cold... 25°F up here this A.M.! xoxox
Date: 4/2/2013 6:31:00 AM
You should write about Carol's Dragon and Troll, Ha ha! Maybe you could write about how its so cold outside, why oh why is it so cold in April? I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning my friend! I truly loved this fascinating piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/3/2013 6:15:00 AM
Ah yes... Carol's famous dragons and trolls! LOL Good idea... gonna get right on it! 25°F this morning! YIKES!
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