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What Noise This

WHAT NOISE THIS hard to tell just when one is suddenly aware – electricity? – no! i lay in bed listening with my window wide open early September it’s been quiet all summer not too hot, too chill a cool breeze once in a while with cricket’s ceaseless chirping

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Date: 9/14/2013 9:21:00 AM
Their tune can be annoying or quieting just according how one takes the sound..What place in the orchestra who they occupy?..Maybe the violin section?..Sara
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Date: 9/10/2013 1:25:00 PM
Like the peace filled lines Daver..' (Good write)
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Date: 9/6/2013 11:30:00 PM
so what was it? Those crickets? I listen sometimes and can hear only those dang crickets. I like this one and the feel of a cool September, though i think you and I both prefer them very WARM. BTW, thanks for reading so many of my poems today. How are you feeling now? Any better?
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:08:00 AM
A different approach to bring out summer's silence
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Date: 9/4/2013 9:18:00 AM
Daver, I so love your comment on my Alice poem... :-).. thank you ~~ by the way I like the sudden noise you are hearing.. Glad the stillness of summer is over for you. I am not feeling that breeze down here just yet.. maybe sometime in December.. Can't wait.. sending hugs... xoxo~ Linda
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