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WHAT MAKES IT < >What makes it so perfect that every one deserves it what makes it so evil that it ends in pain what makes it so arogent that it deprives other people what makes it so manipulative that people keep wanting it. I mean MARRIAGE What makes it so normal that it is legalised what makes it controling that two will be made one what makes it so scary that you can not do it alone only God knows what

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Date: 5/12/2012 2:03:00 PM
thats a good poem, it is best to let God choose who hes hve in our life, I have ben maried and divorced, and now i wait fuly for God's direction and timing to bring happiness in his perfect time that way no one can hurt me no more Amen.
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Date: 3/26/2012 8:07:00 AM
Only God should be able to judge what is right and wrong. I've seen enough to know some marriages should never have been legalized.
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Date: 3/12/2012 2:58:00 AM
NICE
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:28:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you odeline. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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