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What Is Wrong With Me?

When I walk by you, I see stars. When I hear your name, My heart pounds. When I hear your song, A smile forms on my face. When you say hi, I want to fall. When I'm around you, I make a fool of myself. What is wrong with me? Why do I feel like this? When you hug me, I want to die, right there in your arms. Whats wrong with me? Your all i think about. Am I crazy? I feel insane. Stars, Heart pounds, Smiles for no reason. Wanting to fall and die in your arms. Am I a loon? Whats wrong with me.

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Date: 6/12/2009 8:58:00 PM
Nothing iw wrong with you. I think that you are in the throes of passion and have expressed it well.
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:39:00 AM
Nothin but true love in this poem, a fine piece of work -Jessica
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Date: 5/28/2009 7:03:00 PM
sounds like love hon. -smiles- good for you
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:35:00 AM
I think nothing is wrong with you. That is a natural feeling of people in love. That happened to me several times...lol. TY for making me smile. This made me happy. Ernilando
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