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What is Going On?

The haystack yields more than just giggles
It shakes first then wobbles and wiggles
A month has now gone by
Can someone tell me why
She now craves ice cream with dill pickles

© Oct 14 2010 For PD's Limerick contest

Copyright © Charles Henderson

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  1. Date: 11/14/2010 8:20:00 AM
    Congrats Charles on your winning poem in P.D.'s pickle contest with this wonderful and well written Limerick luv... enjoy more success this happy Sunday with luv..

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 6:36:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 4:29:00 PM
    great write!

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 12:30:00 AM
    WAs she hibernating a month in the hay? Well, no wonder she is hungry then!! Cute one, Charles! Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 5:32:00 PM
    Oh, this is a delightful Limerick, Charles!! Very clever..Totally enjoyed! Good luck in the contest! Already a winner...Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 11:40:00 AM
    The wiggles in the haystack will end up producing a little wiggler in nine months. Cute limerick, Charles. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 11:04:00 AM
    Smile, Charles, I think you already know why she's craving the icream and pickles. Great limerick! Best wishes in the ccontest. As for your comment, there are many poems with "forced" rhyme. But there are also many poems that I simply don't understand. I'd leave a comment on any poem I understand, but I can't leave one when I have no clue what the author is trying to say. The intent of your poetry is always clear. Thank goodness! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 4:54:00 AM
    Good luck in the contest with this one...Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 10:05:00 AM
    Oops. Can turn out to be good though

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 9:21:00 AM
    Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Charles. If it were my contest you would be the winner Wow. The best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 6:37:00 AM
    Very humorous and witty write for the contest, Good luck, Charles

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 2:29:00 AM
    : D Masterly done, Charles! Best of luck in the Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 8:46:00 PM
    I would venture to say a new addition is on the way luv.. great Limerick for the contest Charles .. good luck my friend.. very cute..