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What If... What if the raindrops were God’s disappointment? What if the sun was His approval? What if walking barefoot on pebbles meant to be quiet? What if hearing loud noises meant to speak softly? What if walking on dewdrops in sandals meant to enjoy yourself? What if skipping like a child meant to have fun? What if all this meant to pay attention? Your life might be on the run.... Holly P. Moore September 2012

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Date: 10/2/2012 1:39:00 PM
I really like the skipping like a child..I think that I will try that one when I get to feeling better..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/2/2012 1:39:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by..I felt that you understood my work..Sara
Date: 10/1/2012 2:41:00 AM
Holly - great poem! My minds ticks over this one....thoughts to ponder. Thankyou for putting your poem here for us all to enjoy
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Date: 9/30/2012 9:23:00 AM
More like life running our on us :( Loved the opening two lines.
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Date: 9/28/2012 1:35:00 PM
That last line is very thought provoking.
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Date: 9/28/2012 1:20:00 PM
Ohhh...You gave me a chill there at the end. Yes,What if! Nice..
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