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What If

What If...

What if the raindrops 
were God’s disappointment?

What if the sun
was His approval?

What if walking barefoot on pebbles
meant to be quiet?

What if hearing loud noises
meant to speak softly?

What if walking on dewdrops in sandals
meant to enjoy yourself?

What if skipping like a child
meant to have fun?

What if all this meant to pay attention?
Your life might be on the run....

Holly P. Moore
September 2012

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  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:39:00 PM
    I really like the skipping like a child..I think that I will try that one when I get to feeling better..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 10/2/2012 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by..I felt that you understood my work..Sara
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:41:00 AM
    Holly - great poem! My minds ticks over this one....thoughts to ponder. Thankyou for putting your poem here for us all to enjoy

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 9:23:00 AM
    More like life running our on us :( Loved the opening two lines.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:35:00 PM
    That last line is very thought provoking.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:20:00 PM
    Ohhh...You gave me a chill there at the end. Yes,What if! Nice..