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What If

what if you open your eyes and your whole life is merely a dream an unheard scream what if you look upon yourself and your reflection is just obscene a censored scene what if you feel the skies and the stars are imperfections defective sections what if you speak in lies and the truth is deception a form of fiction what if you had the choice to drown forever in illusion or would you rather face the fact? An endless confusion

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Date: 1/23/2016 10:43:00 PM
TAREK, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/30/2010 11:21:00 PM
Friend , your opening para contains deep spirituality and philosophy ! THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO SAY THAT THIS EXISTENCE OF OURS IS A FAKE ! AFTER DEATH , WE WAKE UP TO CONFRONT OUR REAL LIFE ! THANKS ! -RAJ
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Date: 7/30/2010 1:53:00 PM
Facing facts sometimes is very difficult but we all have to face them one day and in one way better now than later..Good job..Enjoyed your work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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