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What I Wanted To Say But Couldn'T Say Mothers Day

no greater love can ever live nothing can equal what i give no single act of love is the reason why many were the sacrifices i gave I by no means ephemeral the tears i have cried my youth and beauty i had to give up the fun the parties that kind of stuff each day i suffered a little while all for the sake of a healthy child they call it labor when a child is born for something that really goes on and on there is nothing in this world that i wouldn't do to guard your safety and care for you to raise up a child in they way they should go i begged Heavenly Father the things i should know for the day that was coming the day that you'd go and there are so many things that you do not know they call it labor and indeed it is but what you don't know is i'm in labor everyday you live and though you live in a separate house my spirit will live there also like a little mouse and though you may live far away the ghost of me hovers you everyday

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Date: 8/12/2023 6:23:00 PM
TS, I quite enjoyed this profound poem 'what i wanted to say but couldn't say mothers day'. The words flow over like a warm wave. Oh, also a fav. -Richard
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:01:00 PM
Hola, SituationStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 6/11/2012 2:45:00 AM
This is a very good poem and I hope that you write more like it. Thank you for sharing this one with us.
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:21:00 PM
This is a great piece of poetry that comes from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 5/28/2012 9:51:00 PM
How are you? I'm like a little mouse... sprinkling gold all over the floor... eek!! eek! eek! good night,..pd
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Date: 5/29/2012 8:55:00 AM
I'm fine minnie. How are you?
Date: 5/28/2012 11:28:00 AM
Very nice I will read this again there is more in it than shows to me xx
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Date: 5/28/2012 8:31:00 AM
our kids are the gleam in our eyes,keep labouring,great
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Date: 5/26/2012 8:31:00 PM
WOW,Stupendous write!!!
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Date: 5/26/2012 5:11:00 PM
wow, this is meant for children's day!! Your great love for your child shines through this one with your words. It's nice to get a hint at who you are too by reading this one. Luv, Andrea
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The Situation
Date: 5/26/2012 7:37:00 PM
keep guessing.
Date: 5/21/2012 8:50:00 AM
You reach out with such emotion in this lovely poem. I believe we all share our soul with those who bring meaning into our lives. What could have more meaning that someone who is a part of us. A lot of beautiful thought in this very special verse!
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:36:00 AM
Hi! TS.... like a little mouse... do you really think your presence will not be notice... indeed... labor everyday... that was my favorite image... good night..pd
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Date: 5/20/2012 4:16:00 AM
P.D. the mouse is always noticed.
Date: 5/19/2012 4:26:00 PM
Motherhood does indeed go on and on. Thank you for this poem.
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Date: 5/19/2012 11:54:00 AM
Very enjoyable read... I have a new poem from a more light hearted mother son relationship. I'd love to hear your response!
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Date: 5/19/2012 8:31:00 AM
Yes, the mother and child are always connected..Enjoyed reading your work..Sometimes in life the wind of storm that is in the natural is not nearly as violent as the storm that rages within ourselves or within the four walls of a house..Notice I didn't say a home..Good job you have done here..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work "Storm"..Sara
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