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what i want

what i want is someone to hold
someone who loves, and is never cold
who's eyes are kind, with a heart of merit
who will cry on my shoulder, and with my anger share it

i will not stand for the impure of heart
dull, or dry, or with no spark
a love of great that never ends
that's when life truly begins.

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  1. Date: 6/26/2010 8:24:00 AM
    I think I can relate to this as well, Charles :) will be keeping my fingers crossed for you! btw just one typo for "whose" in your 3rd line--hope this helps! --nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2010 8:31:00 PM
    thanks P.D. you really arn't a bad person, just gotta get to know you. friends?

  1. Date: 6/25/2010 4:40:00 PM
    ope you get what you want ,, after all you ask for normal things,, nice poemm different from what my spoiled self would want.. love the way you ended your poem as well,.,,, from the ((Rap Retard me--p.d.)) i had fun reading all your poetry Charles.. hope you did not mind,,Really loved look forward to read more,..pd..

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 10:37:00 AM
    I like the rhythm of your poem as I read it... Hope you find that love or it finds you that you are looking for. Your titled captured me and it was enjoyable to read your poem. Love, Susan

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 1:17:00 AM
    I think i want a piece of this lovely poem too. .Who doesn't?C

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 12:10:00 AM
    this is surely what i want too...i hope i can have it...great write!