What Do You Want Me To Do

Do you want a comment on your poem?
well don't bite my head off
Or wack me on the knuckles

FYI...read it twice maybe three times before you get angry
It may mean something else....non threatening

Whoever hurt you in the past....I am not them!!

Trying to be an encourager!!
Not a discourager!!
PEACE!!
LOVE and POETRY!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/22/2017 6:31:00 PM
purger, purser, verger, discourager
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Date: 2/8/2012 10:02:00 AM
just to be the way you are, does that answer your qustion, Doris, you never fail to surprise, with you awesome work. harry
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Date: 2/8/2012 10:04:00 AM
your, not you . harry
Date: 2/5/2012 7:19:00 AM
And so i have always found you to be Doris..! enjoyed the sentiments here also..)
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Date: 2/3/2012 4:11:00 PM
Smile ˜ Hey Sweeetie Pooh ˜ I Went Ahead & Left The Sequel I Had Mentioned Earlier Unto Your Beauty At Sweeet Shannon Deane's Last Post * "CatPeople II" ˜ I Hope You Like It ˜ Love Always, John!:) *
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Date: 2/2/2012 11:49:00 AM
What is wrong with you and soup?....I hope nothing..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I have got one more written that I want to post today..You probably will like it...This added responsibility with Cody is about to put me over the edge..God will provide the strength to handle it though...Mom
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Date: 2/2/2012 4:49:00 AM
You written lovely poem and are always sweet in commenting. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/1/2012 10:30:00 PM
Doris those of us who know u luv u so much.. your words are most entertaining luv.. and this piece states much and speaks volumes.. so peace luv and poetry back at cha.. lets rock ..
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Date: 2/3/2012 4:15:00 PM
Yessss, My Sweeetie * Let Us Roooockkkk * In Your Sweeet Luv!! :)
Date: 2/1/2012 7:39:00 PM
ummm... Doris... i got 3 set of 3 words for you... 1. L O L... 2. little blue pill 3. your so xool...... always ;-) pd
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Date: 2/1/2012 6:02:00 PM
"What do you want me to do?" Just serve your maker and be the Love that you are. Smile. I'm doing well Doris, thanks for askinging. I have a lot on my plate right at the present, don't know if I will have time to do much poetry any more. 2012 seems to hold a lot changes to do with my life. Probably I will write an occasional blog. Good luck in your endeavors. Hope you are well. Agape, Moses
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