What Did You Do

I still remember the day you stepped into my life,
			like a pebble in a still lake,
		and gave me a moment, a moment so dear,
			i could die for its sake.
		the waves touched me, where i sat quietly at the shore,
			thinking of you, your thoughts are a storm that grows  evermore,
		every gesture you make has that fine spark,
			which makes me think of you when its cold and its dark.
		i knew when it began, i was sure right from the start,
			its you, the one destined to rule all over my heart.
		its in my eyes , all you have to do is turn around and see,
			read my soul and come to know what you really mean to me.
		Every step we walked together is a golden footprint in time,
			i hear your voice in every whisper,every melody each  rhyme.
		it feels like sunshine when you smile,my heart begins to  chant your name,
		i had a wreck of a life, you came along and spoilt it iam  sure it never will 
                     be the same..           
			shh.... listen carefully, can you not hear the tune?
		It sings,.one day very soon it shall be just you, me and that  beautiful moon.
			the skies are clear,the wind is cool,the stars are  shining bright
			how I pray the time to stop,when we meet tonight..
		Its the wish I wish for ,the dream I dream,the calling of my  heart..
		All the distance and all the people may never do us apart..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/13/2013 9:35:00 AM
These words are full of emotion and feeling wrapped around love and devotion. Every line is full of depth and caring. nice job
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Aseem Desai
Date: 10/13/2013 11:32:00 PM
thankyou again..
Date: 5/23/2012 9:32:00 PM
Sameer,,,, very deep... and beautiful... ... thank you for sharing... good night..pd
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Aseem Desai
Date: 5/23/2012 11:00:00 PM
thanks so very much
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