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What Could Have Been

What could have been You rule my dreams with no mercy You give me no peace I gave up on us long ago I know now that it was a mistake. The way we could talk for hours The way we didn’t have to talk at all I miss the time we spent together I still hold on to hope. Your smile is unique and exotic The way you move is from a dream The look in your eyes is hypnotizing I wish that it never changed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 5:17:00 AM
Very creative and passionate write with feelings of love, Joshua
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Date: 10/15/2010 4:51:00 AM
Unfinished and meaningless. Who is being written about and why should we care?
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