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what are you thinking


What are you thinking of when you feel GODS might
When you feel his presence and your hearts in flight.
Do you feel a chill going thru your veins
As you look up to the sky and call out his name.

Don’t you feel a comfort that you’ve never known before
As he enters your heart and opens his door.
You have a reserved spot in your heart for him
When he took away your mortal sin.

What thoughts go thru your mind when
Everything that went wrong- turns out fine.
When your life has turned around and all
You hear are beautiful sounds.

When you want to stand up and sing
And you feel every emotion it brings.
What are you thinking when your family and friends
Say they’ll follow the lord till their end.

What are you thinking when you see
A newborn baby cry and turns and opens its eyes
And looks directly at you and you don’t know what to do.

What are you thinking when you look at 
Humanity destroying all of GODS creations
And starvation and hunger in every nation.

I do not know what will be on your mind
But if we believe in GOD we’re one of a kind.


Copyright © louis rams

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  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:25:00 PM
    So true,so true. To believe in God is beautiful. It is something that we should never lose. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:12:00 PM
    Oh!...You almost brought me to tears here Louis! You've given me another Fav...I love the heart in this write...Keep up the great work my friend. :o) Love lives in Your heart!

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    Date: 8/30/2012 7:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much for this comment dan you make me feel blessed.