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What Ails You Brother

It is up to our hearts to arrive at noble feelings and walk with them all the way up to noble thoughts. The fields are laden with rips horrendously unmended Will it be availed to mend them without surrender? Come brother and walk with me when you can into a better place in which dreams are supported by realities not baffled by them. Come brother and talk with me as much as the truth can speak against their wounds and crimes. Come brother and take good care of your health for the journey is long. It is a journey of life not that of those who tell you not to go and tell me not to come. Come brother and don't tell me about what ails you for what ails you ails me too. We will walk and work and talk together, not apart, together. Chokri Omri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/11/2021 3:02:00 PM
A pleasure to find your poem of conciliation published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Chokri~
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Date: 12/15/2012 6:51:00 PM
I would be happy to walk along, this is an inspiring and supportive write. God Bless
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Date: 12/14/2012 5:23:00 PM
Chokri,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD
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Date: 12/13/2012 9:35:00 AM
"What ails you ails me too." The universal language, eh. Enjoyed. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:15:00 PM
very nice write, I really enjoyed the read
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Chokri Omri
Date: 12/12/2012 8:44:00 AM
So happy to hear this dear friend. You are most welcome.

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