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H ades E ternal L oveless L ife without God This has been on my mind and heart for awhile after having a nightmare...

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Date: 2/7/2013 11:11:00 AM
You are really good at these acrostics. I have heard that nightmares about hell can be life-changing. Powerful words.
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:46:00 AM
Sara, dear.... I view these happenings as attacks by the evil one and am gratified that I am enough of a burr under his saddle that he must attack me. It means I must be of some concern to him.... Take comfort and move on..... Love Ya Much..... Jake
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Date: 2/3/2013 7:01:00 AM
Yes, it's not a good place! No one wants to go there (I hope). We just have to think. Sorry you had that dream, Sara! Have good ones from now on :)
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Date: 2/2/2013 8:35:00 PM
Well it is a poem to make you think Sara.." I don't like the idea of you having a nightmare experience; thoughh here's wishing you better dreams..Joe.."
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Date: 2/2/2013 5:09:00 AM
dont want you having nightmares, Sara,, but do make for awesome poetry..
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:33:00 PM
Sounds like you had one of my nightmares, excellent write and so profound.
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Date: 2/1/2013 5:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 2/1/2013 2:46:00 PM
I often have similar dreams. Beautiful poem!
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:26:00 AM
It happens many times. An unforeseen word bears meaning with the help of which we ask with in ourselves to find out in real perspective. Excellent poem enjoyed. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/1/2013 8:42:00 AM
sara, I fully understand how such a dream affects one's writing. I dreamed something like this before too!!
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