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What a Snafu

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What a Snafu

This happens when you have no extra time-
There you stand in the queue
Patiently, you wait
There’re two ahead of you--
You’re so close to the gate
You watch as time runs out
Tick tock…., you’re in a crunch
Up goes the sign, “Out to Lunch”
Now, your face wears this pout
Oh! What a snafu!

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 6:43:00 AM
    Annalise congratulations on this very cute win...Donna

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:46:00 AM
    Hi sweet Annalise, Congratulations with your fun winning grook ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:49:00 AM
    Don't you just HATE that?...Great rhyme scheme and congrats my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Congrats on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Lovely write,Annalise...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you,great friend..

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 12:47:00 PM
    So aggravating. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:07:00 AM
    many congratulations Annalise xx

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:57:00 AM
    Get's better eachtime I read it. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:50:00 AM
    We have all been there in those lines..Now people text and it helps the time pass..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging.Sara

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Excellent piece... you have written a wonderful piece... xxx Michael

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 12:19:00 PM
    It is really good. You don't waste words

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 11:31:00 AM
    you bring the situation to life,, love this

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:21:00 AM
    This is a great entry for the contest my dear friend Annalise! A brilliant idea written from the theme and this is a winner for me. Good luck and best wishes! Thank you so much for sharing and your warmth congratulatory comment on my win. My hearty congratulations also in all your wins. Have a blessed and wonderful day! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 9:23:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 6:05:00 PM
    I especialy hate this when waiting to get on a ferrie and your like three cars away from getting on. Grrrrr good poem.

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 8:52:00 AM
    hahaha.. yes, I hate that, too! great write.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:25:00 AM
    nice write wishes

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 11:05:00 PM
    This is GREAT GROOK, Annalise. A sure winner. I hate when this happens too.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:29:00 AM
    I recognize myself in your poem Annalise. - Well written :) :) - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Been there... done that! LOL Most everyone can relate to this one! Loved it and you... Jack xox