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What?

WHAT?  (Rictameter – for Andrea Dietrich)

I’m lost!
Look all around
There’s nothing familiar
Except those distant tall buildings
Oh    but they must be miles and miles away
Can’t remember how I got here
This must be a nightmare
But if it’s not?
I’m lost!

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Sara Kendrick Date: 4/26/2010 5:08:00 AM Great write...I feel that way inside these large buildings ...I get confused...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/18/2010 6:00:00 PM Much enjoyed,,indeed...Charma Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 4/18/2010 1:14:00 PM senior moment--I have a few creeping up on me. Login to Reply

Kim M Date: 4/18/2010 8:15:00 AM Clever! ...and isn't it amazing how, in this rictameter, you created a visual of the sky scrapers of the distant city line? Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 4/17/2010 7:58:00 PM I can't believe the tittle got me again, enjoyed the second time more. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/17/2010 2:41:00 PM goodness I do hate those lost dreams...but YOu knew where you were just not how you got there ...a Why am I? dream....Light & Love Login to Reply

Royal Trevino Date: 4/16/2010 6:33:00 PM You'll find your way:)... good write Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 4/16/2010 5:33:00 PM Hello, Daver I can comment all I can think of . But Andrea just made me lose head. It looks like fun on what ever dreams you to are writing. Irma ..I liked it by the way. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/16/2010 2:29:00 PM And now you gotta do one about me running around lost in a stupid campus building!! I'll try to think of some other dreams of mine to inspire you more. thanks for feeling inspired by my Lost dream! You are the greatest, Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Date: 4/16/2010 1:30:00 PM I think we all feel this way at times. Nice dedication to Andrea. I see you've been exploring various forms. I've enjoyed reading the results. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2010 11:00:00 AM I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Daver. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Corinne Curcio Date: 4/16/2010 9:56:00 AM I work amongst the tall buildings! First in NYC and now in New Joisey! I'm doing okay Daver. Adjusting to a new office in a new State this week. How are YOU doing, my friend? :-) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/16/2010 6:37:00 AM This fits good on the one who has just lost his head. I am sure you are confused . May be you are asleep. How ever you end up. I am sure you are all right . Nice read this morning. Login to Reply