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Wet Rain Flows Down

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Wet Rain Flows Down

Wet rain flows down her silken face Never showing her true disgrace Water runs quickly on her skin Shedding feelings of what’s within Falling down, learning from her grace She breathes between each flooded taste Horror stricken girl with pink lace Not knowing where water has been Wet rain flows down Rain carries on with its own pace Beads of it gather in its place She never believes that she wins By the steady stream which begins The rain pours, her heart does displace Wet rain flows down
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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:57:00 AM
    so feel-good seeing you quill rhymes, russell.. this graceful gift ; pensive and touching... i feel the rain dripping down her heart; super my friend!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:45:00 PM
    you are getting better and better at rondeaus, Russell. well, you are my last one to see tonight and I have to get off here!! See ya

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:51:00 PM
    beautiful essence to this stellar write Russel luv .. rain parallels the emotions contained in deep breathtaking lines swelling to crescendo .. most intense poetry my friend ..

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 12:59:00 PM
    awesome rondeau, my friend