We'Re Always In a Hurry

We’re always in a hurry
To get there yesterday,
With the absence of caution
We blindly speed on our way.

The only goal we harbor
Is to get there fast,
Ignoring respect and patience
As we hurry on past.

With the flip of a finger
Or honk of the horn,
Our disrespectful impatience
Is driven to be born.

Four letter words
Carelessly fly from our mouth,
As traffic builds up
North, East, West and South.

Many innocent victims
Have been robbed of their lives,
As our desire to hurry
Continuously thrives.

We are all guilty
Including me,
Of speeding through life
As fast as can be.

Isn’t it time 
For us to slow down,
To impose caution and respect
For other people around.

We’re always in a hurry
To get there yesterday,
Even if life becomes
The cost that we pay.


I'm Still trying to perfect this poem.  For some reason it seems like it's either missing
something--or something is out of place.  Your opinions would be greatly appreciated!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/25/2011 11:36:00 AM
this poem touches me personally because of the corruption that has befallen my country by its leadership. People here are in a hurry to make money and they end up taking it from the hungry citizenry. let your ink flow tirelessly dearest Debrah
Login to Reply
Date: 8/3/2009 12:01:00 PM
I totally agree Deborah, we always seem to want everything done now, excellent>>James
Login to Reply
Date: 10/4/2008 12:28:00 PM
I love your words...just as they are. They are your words alone, and that is enough!! :) Blessings ~Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2008 5:05:00 AM
I agree with James...let it lay...and walk away. For at least a week, the words will come. I like it the way it is, and agree totally. Love Kristin
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2008 9:14:00 PM
let it sit for awhile, let it rest, go on to something else, and one night during sleep, it will come to you like a thunderstorm comes on us so fast so will the idea to do what you must do. but this was a great poem as is, and so very true, a great message.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2008 7:20:00 PM
it's innocence and the message it conveys is enough consideration to understand that this is a true poem, straight from the heart.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad